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VIII


"Life is good."
Says the man with a heart condition.
A heart condition that has put him and his family through so much strife,
So much sorrow,
A condition that only can and will get worse,
A condition that has made him angry at the government,
Made him angry at pharmaceutical companies,
That has brought him to his knees coughing,
Made his family more scared than they ever have,
Made a strong woman trying her best to never show a tear weep,


"Life is good."
Says my father,
Sad thing is
That I just
Can't agree.
©2009 ~EmeralFairy
:iconemeralfairy:

Author's Comments

Some poetry. I dislike titling what I write, so I'll just go Roman Numerals. Since dA is being a jerk, in that only people that pay money can get decent critiques on their work, please, if you comment on this, I'd like some constructive criticism. Tell me what you like or don't like and what I should improve on. It would mean a lot to me if you would.

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:iconbomber49:
I like how you don't try and make it rhyme. It's good just the way it is.

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I'm as smooth as sandpaper. :D
:iconqueenserena12345:
I don't write poetry, so, I can't help you. xD I like it.

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Don't click this, I'm warning you. A dragon will eat you.
A story is not about facts. Nor is it a compilation of facts; It is the result of thought.
*BJD!:heart:*
:iconemeralfairy:
Really? Thanks!

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ars longa, vita brevis-
art is long, life is short
:iconemeralfairy:
Lol, no its okay. I'm glad you like it, though.

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ars longa, vita brevis-
art is long, life is short

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